Yeah, this is not going so well.
I knew it would be this way, though. Hiro is an utter mess, and besides, editing always starts like this. A whole lot of AUGH and why did I DO that? and hell, what did I mean to write instead of “the revenant bit of his hand” and Oh frak, did I start with a character waking up AGAIN?
So. Onward?
Onward.
Time for a battle cry?
Time for a battle cry.
AUGH!!!
“Everybody has a secret world inside of them. All of the people of the world, I mean everybody. No matter how dull and boring they are on the outside, inside them they’ve all got unimaginable, magnificent, wonderful, stupid, amazing worlds. Not just one world. Hundreds of them. Thousands maybe.” — Neil Gaiman
That’s it. What you do with it is up to you–but I challenge you to do something with it.
Much fun was had, and I have pics! I’ll hide the slideshow to avoid issues with the menu bar.
More here. →
I don’t know if it’s the “begin with smut” part. I really don’t think it is. I think it’s the fact that I didn’t know much of the story beforehand except for the smut.
So the smut is utterly wonderful, and the rest of the story is…just about non-existent? Yeah, that’d be it.
Therefore, I have decided to leave it for a bit. I feel like I have tons of unfinished stories lying around, but I actually don’t. I finished two of the manuscripts I had left undone last year, and I know I’ll finish more.
Elizabeth Bear writes that she’s the worst example for any working writer, because she meanders from project to project, often works on more than one at a time, et cetera. I don’t think I’m that far on the ADD-writer spectrum, but I think it’s pretty clear that this book, at least, does not want to be written all in one go.
So I’ll let it rest. I am far too much in love with the characters to worry that I’ll never come back!
Next up: EdMo! And for a challenge, instead of doing Joss, which is nearly done thanks to two prior passes–I’m going to do Hiro. Yes, both books. Both hugely messy, parts in a variety of places, flashbacks and smut and pacing issues and things left out books.
This should be…interesting. For a value of interesting that includes “utterly mad.”
40 is less than impressive.